I think your work is absolutely beautiful as a whole . Just a slight critique on this one, though. Sorry, but it feels wrong to me the way you cast the light from the lantern. My eye stops to focus on the -Straight Line- of light and shadow across her chest. And my brain wants to figure out why...
I Respectfully suggest that your light illuminate Her right inner arm, right breast and neck and face (the side with lantern)... and put Her entire left side in shadow that blends into the darkness of the night around her.
Interesting effect of the hand fading like that. I very much like this. I think I would have liked to have a bit more of her be ephemeral and fading into the dark from which she appears to be a part. Maybe I'm reading it wrong though. I like how her hand is solid in front of the moon along with the lantern, but her hair could be "merged" with the night like her left hand. I don't know, as that might have ruined it too. Anyway - Very Nice!
Aloha! Beautiful as always! And I'm still having trouble with pen tool such as the glow lines around her hands! I wish that you give me the step by step tuts! I could do that better if I try harder but I struggle with it! Like I said, beautiful as always! And can I send you the photo of my son? I'm ready to send you one!